She sat by the corner of her window, wrapping up the last lines in her letter –
"….and remember? Not once have u tried to console me when I was low. I loved the way you teased me, laughed at my ponytail, trying to cheer me up at those times. I guess this is all as much true today as it was that day. Those seemed like fleeting moments of eternal happiness. They came like a shooting star and vanished as quickly. How I wish time froze then. I miss you tons! Take care. Good luck for your exams and keep in touch!
p.s. You better not reply in 2 lines like last time. Or else, when we meet during semester vacation, you won't go back to college in the same shape. Like you always say, 'Dangerous girl!'"
She read through her letter once more and then sealed it with glue. She walked to the nearby post office and posted the letter. While on her way back home, she lost herself in memory of the days they spent together in school, 10 years back. The first time they met was in class 5 and their class teacher made this naughty boy sit next to her. It was the worst day of her life, or atleast she thought. They spoke little. Not even a part of their text book or a speck of eraser dust would be allowed to fall on the other's desk. And then, one day it happened. He came to class with a sling supporting his hand. She was instructed by the teacher to help him take down notes and so, she reluctantly obliged.
That day, over lunch, she softly asked him, "How did u manage to get that fracture?"
He smirked at her and said, "I thought this would be a cool excuse to make you take down notes for me!"
The next moment, he found himself holding his tooth in his palm and said, "Thath thooth haz bin shakin for a wik now. Dhanks for gettin itt off!" While one half of her insisted that he deserved it, the other half was shocked and guilty with the turnover of events. While she apologized to him, he winked at her and said, "Dangerous girl!" It was the first time they looked into each other's eyes and smiled.
They slowly grew into the thickest of friends. While she would teach him how to factorize polynomials, he would teach her his '20-best-excuses' for walking in late to class. She would draw diagrams for him in his biology record, while he would play book cricket. She was surprised how he managed to remember every member of the cricket team in the order of their batting line up, while she struggled to memorize the first row of the periodic table of elements.
That aside, the best part of their day was the lunch break. She loved the curd rice that his mom packed for him, while he loved the rotis that her mom sent. He would help her finish off her box of slimy ladies finger curry, and in turn, she had to drink up his bottle of chilled milk. But life's norms dictate that one better not get engrossed in the rosy side for too long. In their 9th class, his father decided to shift him to another school closer to their home. That day she sat in one corner of the class, her face buried beneath her skinny arms.
He came up to her that day and said, "OMG! Look at your cheeks!! So damn red! Were you preparing to act as a clown in the circus?" She glared back at him and he continued, "Now come on. Stop this. Else I am going to start on how your pony is beginning to curl behind your back. See I can even hang my school bang in it!!" He pulled her pony and well anticipating her reaction, prepared for a dash. Her cheeks turned red with anger. She sprinted behind him along the corridors and down the staircase, until they finally reached the football ground and she could run no further. He stood jogging at a safe distance from her, laughing.
She sat in the middle of the ground, panting for breath and hot with anger. Finally, trying to control his laughter, he came up to her and offered his hand. She held his hand and lifted herself up. Once she was up, she gave him a tight fist on his tummy and he burst out laughing again. They walked across the ground to the canteen, and he got her an icecream. So easy it was to cool her down. Before they parted ways that day, he kissed her on her forehead and cycled towards his home.
She stood there watching him go. It was then that she realized how his entry represented a whole new world to her, a world possibly not born until he arrived.
44 comments:
absolutely awesome post...no words to describe this.......a perfect candyfloss love (or friendship) story... really loved this one a lot :D
the beauty of this story is you have kept it short and left several things untold leaving to the imagination of the readers themselves........
Way to go prithzz...i believe this is ur 1st try at fiction.......... wowwww and a soooper one this is
Go..Go...Go.....
Someone get me a dictionary here....I am running out of adjectives to describe my feelings for this post.
Girl...that was an AWESOME post.
Oru kutty handycam vechchu shoot pannanumnu aasaiya irukku :D
suweet post ponnu...keep it up!.. :)
cool post gal....way to go...
sweeeeeeeetttt one...
Beautifully written post...
Hey prithz!! that was one more cute post from u :-) Loved it :D
Jus one word...
brilliant!! :)
natpai patri nalla solli irukeenga ... manadhoedu mazhaikaalam feel varudhu ...
kavignargalae thinuruvaanga vaarthai kedaikaama comment ezhudha idha padicha, apparam naan eppadi
Someone is growing up stronger now with all cute things inside her heart to express so well.
beautifully written post...
Absolutely AMAZING! This post is just
awesome!
I can't even imagine writing anything like this! Speechless!
I think u can try for any magazine or daily.
Reading ur posts like this, i almost get inferiority complex that i can't write anything like this nu! :(
Great you are! Really!
a lovely beautiful story!!! :)
loved reading it!
kepp it up!!! :)
@ rsubras:
Thks anna! Candyfloss friendship - love that description. Very true indeed! :)
@ harish:
Hehe! Neenga dhan yen guru :D Neenga ipdi sonna yeanna mei silirkuthu :) Handy cam vechu shoot ah? KK kooda collaborate pannikongo :) Super ah irukum!
@ brute:
Thks yaar!
@ golmaalgopal:
Thkuuuu! :D
@ ganesh ranganathan:
Thks yaar! How is ur final year report coming?
@ g3:
Thks g3!!! Glad u liked it! :)
@ fun2fun:
Hehe! :D Tks!
@ chriss:
Romba pugazhadinga! Shy shy ah varuthu :D
@ priya:
Hehe! Let me imagination catch fire :D
@ karthik b.s.:
Thks! Nee mokkai podarathu paathu yeannakum andha maadiri mokkai poda mudiyala nu poramaiya iruku! :D BTW, when are u goin to stop calling ppl great?
@ sandhya ramachandran:
Welcome to my blog! Thks a ton! Glad u liked it. :)
hey da..that was really awesome...loved the way u narrated it...expecting more from u like this..:D
//he got her an icecream. So easy it was to cool her down//
ROTFL...chancela...i can visualise u munching tt icecream...LOL...soooper start complan..kalakkal beginning.awaiting next part.....it hits too closer to home to sound like fiction :D :D unnoda status mesagesku pinadi ipdi oru story varumnu i d expected :D :D...awaiting next part :D
@ mystery:
Hey! Long time! How u doin? Me too hoping to write more liek this :)
@ gils:
Echuseme!!! I touched the real part of life to churn my story. Vaenumte build up kodukathinga pa.. Innume kadaisila, 'the end' nu poda poren :D
Status msg na 'liar liar' lendhu suritinadhu :D
chanceilla....super post...very cutely ritten.......a feel good post...and a very fresh romantic flavor it has.........i am wordless to type....donno wat else to say....awesome post
wow, excellent narration.
njoyd reading it :)
Attendance podalamnu than vanthen... then something told me read little bit, but once I started I could'nt stop so read it fully...
Amazing narration Prithz... I picturised the whole post... If at all we need to shoot this like what Harish has told, its already canned in my mind :) too gud :)
u have become a superb writer Prithz!
Keshi.
liar liarla enga varuthu? hey hows ur prep goin on? ipo eggjam nadakuthula un iskoolaa? padikama kadha adichindu iruka? :D :D
@ zanychild:
Thanks a lot! Glad u liked it. Welcome aboard and hope to see you around.
@ arunkumar:
Thanks arun!
@ kk:
Vaanga late appicer! neenda video edhudhamaadiri, na oru video edhuthen.. like u reading blog posts in super enthu.. n behind u.. unga sottai thala boss nikkaramaadiri! :D Hehehe!
Glad u enjoyed shooting this scene :)
@ keshi:
Thanks keshi!
@ gils:
Liar Liar la, when Jim Carrey's wife is in the restaurant wid her bf(Jerry i think),he asks her to join him in Boston, that time he says those words. Padam paakum bhoodu idhulaam note down pannikanum. Future la useful ah irukum :D
Exam starts in 2 days time. Preparation status is pathetic.
Too good post..short and soooo sweet!!!!!!!!!
hey unnoda sila "slightly mokkai" posts lam kooda 50+ comments vanthiruku..this one certainly deserves to go places........ and shud get more readers
eppadinga ivlo supera ezhudhareenga......
//like u reading blog posts in super enthu.. n behind u.. unga sottai thala boss nikkaramaadiri! :D Hehehe!//
Naan nalla irukarthu unakku pudikalaya??? :D
heh i am puzzled!! truly puzzled!
kutti ponnu g3 post la peel panni iruka maathir irukku....work bendu vaangaraanga....endha blog kum olunga poi padikka mudiyala...indha wkend padichitu solre....cheers :-)
Good luck for your exams :-)
@ sundari:
Tks!!! Welcome here :)
@ rsubras:
Hehe! Andhulaam vandha jhooru. Ippo just want to write dats it. :)
@ bharani:
Ungala maadiri guru tendu kathundadudhan :D
@ kk:
Hehe! Andha aani pudungarthuku nadula, konjam excitement vaendaama? Adhan :D
@ barbi:
U've gotten me puzzled now :D
@ syam:
Heloooo! Ungalukku dhan waiting. Usually oru proxy aanum potutu povingala, adhan aala kanume nu paathen :D Take time n read at ur leisure. Thks a ton for ur wishes :D
//Hehe! Andha aani pudungarthuku nadula, konjam excitement vaendaama? Adhan :D//
yean solla maata... nee sonna maathiri mattum yen boss paartha avaluv than... oru gettapaara thookitu amman padathula vara maathiri Dai! appadi kathite pinnadi odi vanthu kuthuvaar :) appuram program bathila ore graphics'a odum :)
Appuram excitement illa only adventure :D
//Ungala maadiri guru tendu kathundadudhan //....enna vachi comedy edhuvum pannalaye :(
adutha post podradhu!
Humko ugly... cha... agli post chahiye!
maaku kotha postu kaavali!
endhamme... enakku malayalam ariyilla.. illaingil malayalathilayum type senjirukum! :P
Happy Anniverssary to "Ecstasy Re-lived" :D
Hey that was really cool...
It made me think about my school days and the fun we had in school ..
Keep it up yaar.
Happy Blog Anniversary :)
Keep Rocking :P
hay happy blogiversary!
no new posts for ur blogiversary?
:(
Happy Blod Anniversary Prithz :) Keep it going !!! :D
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