Thursday, February 07, 2008

Promises

The early morning rays shot right onto his face through the blinds of his window. The weather was cool and the warmth of the sunrays only made him cuddle closer into the blanket. The alarm blew off on the desk beside him and he simply popped his hand out of the blanket and put it on snooze. Everyday in Ranjit’s life was a fresh new start – smitten with excitement, pressure, happiness, distress and a constant battle with the one thing that no one has possibly beaten - death.


Being a doctor for the past 10 years had its own effects on Ranjit. He was a changing man – with every year, every day, every patient, every sickness and every cure. Medicine had taught him some amazing lessons in life, one amongst which was to enjoy the whole act of ‘being alive’ before you are taken over by something totally unexpected.


He never really complained about how medicine made him disclose certain unpleasant truths to his patients or their relatives. It was a part of his job and he had by now learnt to deal with it. However, there was one thing that Ranjit thoroughly disliked about his profession. It was the way medicine made him look at each of his close ones in the perspective of what could possibly harm them. There was this constant surge of diagnosis that silently ran across his mind as he mingled with his relatives and friends.


The alarm got alive again and finally Ranjit slithered out of his bed and got himself ready to leave to the hospital. He made himself hot coffee and a few slices of butter toast and got into his car. The radio jarred in his car as he drove just under the speed limit on the highway. Upon reaching the hospital he checked on his patients and went straight to the lab to collect some results.


“So, have you gotten the results of that kid in Room 712?” asked Ranjit. He had his hands locked at the back. Fingers crossed.


“Oh. Yes. That child is positive for leukemia. But I guess we are still in the early stages, aren’t we?” Asked the lady. Her eyes looked at him desperately for a positive answer.


“I think so. I’ve got to see the kid. I’ll see u later. Thanks Brinda.” Ranjit spoke in a broken hasty voice and sped away from the lab to the Room 712.


From outside the glass door, he saw the 15-year-old’s mother reading out a sports magazine to him, as he lay down staring at the pictures in the book. Ranjit knocked the door and walked in.


“How are you feeling Jay?” Ranjit spoke in a soft voice.


“Not bad.” Said Jay excited.


After some morning pep talk, Ranjit had no choice but to come to the tough matter in hand. He called Jay’s mother aside and explained to her that her son was now suffering from cancer and that it was possible to nip it off since the diagnosis had been made early. He quickly dealt with the flood of emotions that followed the dreadful news and assured to do his best. A few minutes later he walked back to the Jay’s bed.


“Anything wrong with me?” asked the kid as soon as he saw Ranjit get into the door while his mom stood sobbing outside the room.


Ranjit knew what to say. It was just going to be hard.


Slowly, his voice broke and he bent down to the kid and said, “It’s nothing Jay. You are sick, like every other person in this place.”


“What kind of sickness?” asked Jay, in a voice demanding the entire truth.


“Hmm… Well. Its nothing that should worry you provided you promise me something.” said Ranjit, looking eagerly at Jay.


“You are weird. I’ve never seen a doctor ask his patient a promise. What is it anyway?”


Ranjit felt cold upon hearing Jay’s words. He continued, “I need you to cooperate with my treatment. I’ll make sure you get back to school as soon as possible. Deal?”


“Sure. I promise.” replied Jay.


Just when Ranjit turned to leave, Jay held his hand and called him back.


“Will it hurt doctor?” asked Jay, his face suddenly turning pale.


“I’ll make sure it doesn’t.” assured Ranjit, patting him on his shoulder.


Looking up at Ranjit in between his eyebrows and holding out his palm, Jay asked him in a whisper, “Promise?”


“Promise.” Ranjit replied holding Jay’s open palm.


Thus begins another story of every patient’s childish fear, every relative’s flawless hope, and every doctor’s faithful promise.


5 comments:

Subramanian Ramachandran said...

A typical prithz' story nothing more nothing less...

amazing thing about ur stories are...that it portrays the feelings of a person so nicely and so well that u can actually picture some one in ur mind :)

Akash said...

wow...
I read the last 2 stories. its awesome.
keep writing..and u got yourself a fan...
take care

Dimplicious said...

though i luv ur last story more than this one,this one does ahve its merits...the last line is simply perfect...sums up d entire story i wud say...d theme is sth tat v consider to be a regular routine of a doc...bt d feelings n emotions undergone by d doc is sth tat nobody wud have probably given a thot of..good one yet again!!!

prithz said...

@ rsubras:
Exactly wat i want out of my piece :)

@ known stranger:
Tks :) i'm elated :)

@ dimplicious:
Tks :)

Raz said...

very mans story too! hope, promise n fear! aaah!