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Its that time in life -
Its that time in life -
When those that are sweet to the heart, are not so to the mind.
When thoughts from the same soul seem cantankerous.
When salt and pepper looks are hard to be hidden.
When the bubbling energy seems so muffled.
When anything childish speaks of insanity.
When the fuming enthusiasm is poise.
When ignorance is unaccpetable.
When truth is lucidly raw.
When thoughts from the same soul seem cantankerous.
When salt and pepper looks are hard to be hidden.
When the bubbling energy seems so muffled.
When anything childish speaks of insanity.
When the fuming enthusiasm is poise.
When ignorance is unaccpetable.
When truth is lucidly raw.
Its also that time in life -
When peril means challenge.
When the chaos is just too exciting.
When work is 'dreams under construction'.
When vivacious still sounds an understatement.
When the silence is so deafening and full of meaning.
When responsibilities seem heavy and come crashing down.
When trying to feign innocence seems a wonderful adventure.
When the world seems so bland, yet so bold, bright and beautiful.
When peril means challenge.
When the chaos is just too exciting.
When work is 'dreams under construction'.
When vivacious still sounds an understatement.
When the silence is so deafening and full of meaning.
When responsibilities seem heavy and come crashing down.
When trying to feign innocence seems a wonderful adventure.
When the world seems so bland, yet so bold, bright and beautiful.
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This is that time in life when pandemonium prevails. I feel distorted, lost, confused. A tempest rages within myself - To conquer the unseen, the unheard, the untouched and the unknown. To taste the elixir of life. Its when i try to paint maturity in every thought and attitude. Immaturity seems to breed self-contempt. Well, if these are what they call "growing up", then, i can feel the pristine splendor of this mayhem attack me!!!
38 comments:
Very Awesome and excellently put! Cudnt stop commenting on it!
You surely are maturing....:)
~~contented
Excellent one Prithz :))
Nice one Prithz. Maturity is a subjective term. What may seem immature to you may seem mature to some one else.
kutti ponnu is growing... :-)
yup surely u're growing alright... :))
enna orey kavidhais'ah kottudhu...
and i second kk..it's a relative quality...
yeah, i can clearly see a change in u preethi... nee munna madhiri illa...
appurom andha Reverse Pyramid shape-la poem ezhudheendhau CHANCE-EY ILLA!!!!!!!!!
Unakku sema talent irukku preethi!!!! Keep it up!!!
this time your post just got sweeter...and what more the shape of the poem itself is poetic in itself.....
at the first look i didnt even read ur poem but was very much impressed with the way you have presented your poem..
hats off preethz :) and for the content in it, yea these are the adventures of growing up...... :) chinna vayasula neenga panra kurumbu amma appa handle panna sirama paduvanga and the parents who handle it successfully without spoiling the joy of that kurumbu nala valarkiranga nu artham...this is the next stage.... ippa namma manasu will do all kurumbu and the handling is in our hand..ithai nee successfullah pannita without spoiling the joy of the kurumbu you are a winner nu artham :)
and i loved these lines
When work is 'dreams under construction'.
When vivacious still sounds an understatement.
oi prithz..
poem too good.. speechless.. really dono wat to say! the pyramid effect.. ore de super.. Kudos to you!getting better at poems with each passing day heh.. cool!!
Hmmm yes..We are growing up arent we? atleast it leaves me thinking back abt school days..how we were..What were our priorities then? What are our goals now? Makes you wonder..a lot.. whether you ever had a goal at all!
We are learning the facts of life,its sometimes unpalatable truths, its ups and downs, living its happier moments.. its an experience, sometimes sour, joyous at other times.. be cautious and work..success does await us at the end of the journey.. we wil achieve it!
Keep smilin!
Prad
PS:I did have one goal tho.. racing you in the all exams.. of course, that was a perennial goal for me wasnt it?!!:)wink wink!!
and sweetheart this is when you bid adieu to that teenage girl and say hello to the new woman in you.. :))
itha padichapo ah aah padathila vara...irukku aana ila antha dialogue than nyabagam varuthu.. :D :D.....kozhandha...engayo poita...aana ethuku ipdi paana shapela post potruka...arivu kudamnu symbolica solriya? :D :D
Gils ungalukku mattum yeppadi paana shape'lam theriyuthu? To me it looks like 36-24-36... :)
@ contented:
Thnx a lot!!! Glad u liked it.. :)
@ bharani:
:) Thnx Bharani!!
@ kk:
Thnx KK!!! Well, i have to agree with wat u say :) very true!
LOL @ 36-24-36!!!
@ syam:
Fortunately or unfortunately - YES!
@ golmaalgopal:
Haha.. ore feelings ah poocha.. adhunaala... poem ah kootarthu!! :P
@ karthik b.s.:
Haha! i dunno wat change u r seein.. anyways.. hope i am changing for the good!
Pyramid laam chumma dhan.. to give my shapeless thots a shape as poem!!
@ r.subramanian:
Thnx anna!! Glad u liked it!!! Apram andha poem shape laam - :) thnx to ur ideas also!! ;)
Yeah.. neenga solrathu super correct!! its all in how v are brought up and take things in life.. Very true!! :)
@ prad:
Oye praddy!!! yeanna da, comment panna u comin online.. ym la kaanum... as usual kadalais of venki ah??? nadathu da... unna ooruku vandhu gavanichukarean :P
very true da.. skol la irundha appo, nee yeanna enligh la race adikanum, na unna math la race adikanum nu, chinna pulla thanama v were palyin around.. now.. all that seems so stupid la?? crazy da.. anyways.. still. v enjoyed those moments!!! wish i cud get bk to 10M!!! :)
take care da.. u too keep smiling.. :)
@ s0ulasylum:
OH No!!! me dunt wanna become woman yet!!! NO NO NO NO!!! :'(
@ gils:
Haha!!! ROTFL!!! Chanceh illa!! super comedy... :) edho oru confusion la vandha vaarthaigal, adhe poi ipdi arivi kudam nu sollitingale gils!!
Excellent very well written. It is all part of growing up.
u r growing up kutti ponnu :P
Kalakkareenga Prithz.. Aana namakku thaan onnum purila.. :(
anyways, attendence done :D
u dont want to ??? well, trust me hney.. its the best thing eva.. ! when ur all woman and in control of urself.. its killer.. ;-)
hey now, everyones calling u kutti ponnu, i rem .. keeping that name for u.. right????? :D
Prithz nicely put.
**Its when i try to paint maturity in every thought and attitude. Immaturity seems to breed self-contempt.
Then just don't 'try'. Let maturity come to u naturally.
HUGGGGGGGGGZ!
Keshi.
nice poem! aana are u all right! suddenly out of nowhere u come up with a philosophical one! :)
excellent poem.. shapes to the shapeless thoughts, supero super..
........//preethi said
OH No!!! me dunt wanna become woman yet!!! NO NO NO NO!!! :'(
s0ul said...
u dont want to ??? well, trust me hney.. its the best thing eva.. ! when ur all woman and in control of urself.. its killer.. ;-) //....
i learnt many things frm this conversation....lol(:P)
Beautiful post!
Yea, this is the time when one steps out from the childish cocoon into the big outside world,where one has to take care of one's own self.
starry nights:
Thnx starry!!! Well, i guess so! :)
@ brute:
Hmm :( or :) i dunno!!!
@ g3:
Yeanna g3 ippi sollitinga??? cha!!! yeanna romba sad sad ah varudhu...
@ s0ul:
Haha!! i dunno y i dutn wanna become woman yet.. probabaly i am not ready to part with the "kutti" ponnu image, or prolly i am not yet ready to take up womanhood!! :P
@ keshi:
Thnx Keshi!! Huugggzzz!! Well, yeah... wat u say is true.. but at times, u jsu cant help it when u find urself tryin to act mature.. i mean.. i dunno how it happens.. it jus does... naturally!!! LOL!! guess i confused myself again!!
@ indianangel:
Idhu filawsofy ah??? hmm...moolai konjam kozhambina, ipdi dhan varum nu nanaikarean!!!
@ venkatesh:
Haha!! thnx doctor!!! :) apram, epdi irukinga?? eppo pack n takin off to india??? defence mudichacha??
@ priyankari:
Thnx Priyankari! And Welcome to my space!!! :)
Well, guess u r right!! :)
Accept the truth
Face the reality
Define life
Welcome aboard ! :)
Very matured pritz. Inimey small girl sollamaten:-))
//i rem .. keeping that name for u.. right?????//
S0ul, so???? we'll give you the nobel prize for naming :) happy??? :p
@s0ul:
per vacha prithzuku soru vacheengala s0ul... :D :D..
@kk:
nna.kk nna...ennana...naan solla vanthatha..idi twisto twistnu twistiteengalay...
@prithz:
windies kadangaaranga jeyuchtutaanga paathiya
@ ramya:
Comin comin! :P
@ pria:
Haha!! no no.. u can still call me kutti ponnu :P
@ gils:
:'( pathen! aniyama, dravid ah 49 la out vera aakitaanga!!!
naan very good..defense ellam eppovovo mudichachu.. India packing pathi thinking everyday, but dunno when.. ethaithan vettulayum kekkuranga.. hopefully dec end or jan.. only two weeks..:-( :-)
enna prithz.. profile photo ellam matheteenga??
Ah!!! Excellent one....captured the feelings so beautifully!! I agree with most of them too!!
wow..read it three times..makes ample lot of sense...well done:)
Lovely!!!
Oh My GOD! I had absolutely no idea you write so brilliantly! I almost thought u were quoting someone else!!! Super shape effects!!!! I loved the poem!!! Brilliant! Did i mention this post is brilliant? Because it is! :D
@ venkatesh:
Oh defence laam over ah!!! kalakunga!! apdina.. dec-jan la chennai vandha solunga.. ungakittendhu treat vaangi saapadum.. :P
pazhaya profile image bore adichupoochu.. so time for change!!
@ archun:
Thnx a lot girl!! So, how u doin?? how was diwali??? not seen u around of late... wats happening??
@ mystery:
Hey! thnx a lot!! Am happy u were able to make some sense outta it, coz i myself was confused when i read it later!!
BTW, welcome here.. n do keep stoppin by :)
@ congeniality:
Danku! :)
@ macho girl:
Haha! Thnx a ton girl!!! Jus tryin to explore myself of late... so hidden latent stuff all pouring out i guess :P
kattayam solren.. treat thane.. sure thing.. pesame oru bloggers get togethr vechidalam..
next posht please! ;)
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