You walked into my life so casually,
And ushered me into yours,
Snatched away a huge part of me,
That you now refrain to give back.
My life has been punctuated,
With the times i spent with you.
I am now drenched by your love,
As if i were spattered by my own warm blood.
You made your world fall around me,
Crucified me with undying care.
I stand upon this land, miles away from you,
Hoping against hope, that you be with me.
My heart lingers with your thoughts,
Lying on the threshold of our life, i think,
"If only tears could speak my love for you."
P.S.: A sincere dedication to my best friend.
And ushered me into yours,
Snatched away a huge part of me,
That you now refrain to give back.
My life has been punctuated,
With the times i spent with you.
I am now drenched by your love,
As if i were spattered by my own warm blood.
You made your world fall around me,
Crucified me with undying care.
I stand upon this land, miles away from you,
Hoping against hope, that you be with me.
My heart lingers with your thoughts,
Lying on the threshold of our life, i think,
"If only tears could speak my love for you."
P.S.: A sincere dedication to my best friend.
38 comments:
wow! that was one awesome poem! very very touching...miss Chennai lots don't we??
a touching and beautiful poem
lovely is the word i wud like to give for this :)
but i feel this shudve been posted as friendship day special, neverthless itz fine :)
Hey, That was sweet of you to write for your friend.
Very sensitive, touchy and honest. Love it....
/My life has been punctuated/
It is unfinished tale .....
oi..
thnx.. i was moved.. feels so nice! btw, u knw who tis is :)
An awesome poem from an amazing person ! u r de best girl!
Its sumtimes fulfilling to jus think that.. u knw tis simply wonderful person for so long.. its a strong feeling, i must say!
god, wish i was at spore wid u ! stay strong.. march ahead wid focus to reach ur targets.. n u wil !
frenz forever **
Ciao keep smilin
**(do i hav to say it.. lol!!)
Hey there! Very nicely written Prithz...
//You walked into my life so casually,
And ushered me into yours,
Snatched away a huge part of me,
That you now refrain to give back.//
I liked the above lines very much... great work!!
awww Prithz a friend hurt ya? They come and go...u just be the sweet and loving person that u r. Love will always find it's way to u.
Keshi.
Woww...Beautiful! Very emotional indeed! Your friend must be lucky to have someone who loves and cares so much...:)
Pity that I gonna miss your posts for sometime atleast....Thanks for your kind words...Hope to return back....We will be in touch!
nice poem! very touching indeed!
wow...this indeed is a lovely poem..
Guess shes fortunate to have u as her friend!
Prithz...thats so damn chuveet of u to have dedicated such a lovely post to ur friend. And it is written v.well too.
I hope u have gained back what u wanted (in relation to what u mentioned in my post!). TC.
nice poem...:-))
@ archun:
Hey, thnx a lot!!! Indeed, i am missing chennai a lot!!! :(
@ r.subramanian:
Thnx a ton!!! :)
Your suggestion is very true. But, i need to get "the mood" to write the poem and it sparked only today!! So plz exchuse :(
@ priya:
Hey, thnx a lot Priya!!! :)
Life indeed is an incomplete tale...
@ anonymous:
I think i guessed who you are. Anyways, i shall comfirm wid ya later ;)
Since i havnt yet confirmed, my reply to your comment will be thru ym... hehe.. take care.. and keep smiling too... :)
@ kk:
Thnx a lot KK!!!
Those lines are so true you know. Jus like frnds happen casually in life without our knowledge, these lines came out of me so spontaneously.
Glad you liked it. :)
@ keshi:
Hiya Keshi!!! None of my frnds hurt me Keshi. Even if they did, i would always forgive them and love them as much as i ever do. I just cant live with certain ppl missing in my life. Frnds dunt hurt on purpose, do they. Never ever!!!
I am fine Keshi. I will be fine. Duncha worry. Thnx for those wonderful words. :)
@ contented:
Hey, thnx a lot!!! :) What you said should have been the other way around. I really value the frnds i have and i am so lucky to have a like this one. :)
Hey, busy man!!! Dunt worry, my best wishes are always with you. Have fun with your work and do take a break at times. Good Luck!! :)
@ ketki:
Thnx Ketki and Welcome to my space!!! :)
@ anand:
Thnx Anand!! Everyone is fortunate to have someone like this in our lives. Aren't we??!!
@ has to be me:
Hey, thnx a lot!!!
And regarding what i mentioned in your blog, that was loooong time back. Jus that i got reminded of it again. I am perfectly fine now. My frnd and me are now good pals. Thnx a lot for your concern. :)
@ ganesh ranganathan:
Thnk u!!! :)
Amazingggg!! superbb!!its beautiful :) :)
n i'm doin gudd..all the best 4 the new yr
awww.. tht is soo sweet!
im sure that whoever it is that your missing is also probably missing u as much!!
very well written.. :)
wow! such a beautiful poem!!so touching.. great work n i miss my frnds too :(
Wow this is such a touching and emotional poem and so true. exactly what one feels after giving their heart and soul to some one.
AWESOME....kalakareenga Sinapore'n Vairamuthu neenga thaano... :-)
Am such a sucker for poems!!
Beautifully spun words.
I so love it!!
And so explains your status msg!
surprising that nobody asked whoz that friend with a wicked smile :->
yaaru andha friend? Solla kudadha?
Ok, wonderful poem. did u write it by yourself? ;)
"Loneliness ain't killing me nomore
I am stronger."-nu paatu paadivinga nu paatha, innadhu idhu sogama! Cheer up!
awesome preethi.... good poem :)
@ krithika:
Hi Krithika!! Thnx a lot!!! :)
I am doin great!!! Thnx for ur good luck wishes, they have really boostd my spirits :)
@ the brown eyed one:
Hehe :) Glad u liked it :)
@ s0ulasylum:
Thnx a lot s0ulasylum!!! Both of us miss each other. :( Have a great weekend!!!
@ fun2fun:
Thnx a lot!!! :)
Though technology shrinks the world, still we all do miss our dear frnds. :(
@ starry nights:
Thnx Starry!!! Indeed i am sure, everyone would feel this way. It came so spontaneously form my heart.
@ syam:
Hi Syam!! Ungalukku vethakozhambu venumna naera kelunga, idhulam too much. ;)
@ ramya:
Hi Rumz!!! I was just an honest attempt. Nothing to match your short and sweet style iced with some rhyme. :)
@ r.subramanian:
Ahaaa.. neengale adha aramechudivinga pola iruke..shuuuuuushhhhh!!!!!(*fingers on your mouth*)
@ karthik b.s.:
Hi Karthik!!!
>>did u write it by yourself?<<
Hmm..innume laendu, ungala madiri disclaimer potidren... this piece is straight from my heart, any resemblance has been only purely coincidental nu.. ;p
Ippo "lonliness has always been a frnd of mine" from BSB dhan, i am singing. :) Hey, and dont you worry, i am perfectly fine and cheered up. Vitta, ippo indian women cric team la poi valayadhuven ;p Avalo enthu!!!
@ brute:
Thnx Avinash!!! :)
Syam neengalum matikiteengala hiya!!!
Excellent one...Keep going :)
Disclaimer dhaane. Potudunga!
Aana andha lines romba nalla irundhudhu! Great work! Oru nalla book ezhudhalam neenga! :)
@ kk:
Ennakum naalaiku school tharan dhuthuthuna, apram, naanum , veetu sapadukku alaiven ;(
@ bharani:
Thnx a lot!! :)
@ karthik b.s.:
Hehe :) Book aizhudhara allavukku lam ennaku knowledge pathathu karthik!!! Indha madiri, manasula strike agarthatha i can build up. to frame a story on my own, is something really tuf for me...
Kavidhai super...ada vida andha photo chance a illa. Enga pidicheenga ada?
@ harish:
Thnx Harish!!
That pic is from www.fotosearch.com
lovely poem :-)
I didnt know u wrote poems!! Wow... i got lots to look forward to from this blog :)
And about the post...
I also miss my close friends back at home. But parting is always sweet sorrow... because you know that some day you will get back to ur best friend :)
Awesome poem..
/Snatched away a huge part of me,
That you now refrain to give back./
I love these two lines.. it's so true that when we become really close to someone,our lives become like two pieces of thread that become entangled and refuse to separate!!
Keep writing! :D
@ms. congeniality:
Thnx!! Long time, no see!!! Romba busy ah neenga???
@ macho girl:
Hehe :) Thnx Thnx!!! I too got to look forward to a lot fm ur space. :)
And yeah, it such a wonderful feeling when v see our frnds after a really really long time, words waitin to flow out.. and i dunno wat else... ah.. its so wonderful!!!!
@ confused soul:
Thnx a lot!! :)Glad you liked the poem.
It jus happens that we mingle so much with certain ppl that we tend to become a part of each other...
@ms. congeniality:
Thnx!! Long time, no see!!! Romba busy ah neenga???
Wenderful English!!!!!!!!! :)
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Ippo sandhoshama? :D
Friends do hurt Prithz...some do. May not be intentional but it happens. But yes we have to learn to forgive n move on.
Abt not being able to live w.o. certain ppl in ur life...Im living w.o. my dad...someone I thought I could never live w.o. - Im coping alright.
Hugggggggz!
Keshi.
@ karthik b.s.:
Hehe :) Seri seri.. moola kayandu poi, ennavo xperiment lam panringa... nadathunga..nadathunga... ;)
@ keshi:
Oh Keshi!!! When we lose certain peeple whom we love most dearly, time is the only cure to get over... I am sure u are coping fine with the irreparable loss...
Take care.. Hugggzzzzz!!!!
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